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Pests to
Paychecks
Image of people in
uniforms, great 1080s (double ticks)
Great to your idea
sooner problem
One mans pest is
another mans paycheck (2-3 slide get to this quicker. Because its
an area were not so knowledgeable in, show us more.
Carcasses ----->
Precedents Free fish heads
Partnerships --->
Predator free NZ, Good nature. (double tick)
Validation
A lot of text on
slides
Too wordy
Too much text on
slide
Big chill
network...weird typeface
Simplify
Louder
Went too texty towards
the end
1080 went for too long
Be clearer in our
solution
Why are Criminal
records so important?
Not clear enough of
direction
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